Pilgrims of the Warp, Fluff help needed! Options

[Comrade]

Ok heres a rough look at what I have right now:

-Before the Heresy the Word Bearers were split into 1000 chapters each with a different idea of Lorgars Word (see lexicanum Word Bearers) and they were one of these.
-They believe that true enlightenment can only come through self harming (basically flagellents from WFB).
- Their symbol is a cat 'o' nine tails
- They scorn anyone who doesn't worship all the gods of chaos (not just the 4 main ones).
-Will tolerate cult troops and others as long as they are decent fighters.
- Always crusading.
- Led by a great Daemon Prince ( as yet unnamed), and under him are 2 generals: ezekiel, chosen of tzneetch and Peligras, chosen of khorne.
- build great monuments and have mobile chapels
-General Peligras is pretty much beneath ezekiel in the pecking order, and is often sent out on 'errands' for him.
-Ezekiel is sort of like Ahriman in the aspect that he searches for information and tomes and stuff, but he also looks for other things like treasure and weaponary and ship designs ect.

I'm no great story writer but can some peoples help me turn this into a story/fluff for a tournament?

This post has been edited by Lord Khorne: Jun 10 2009, 10:38 AM